Closed Bug 1131806 Opened 5 years ago Closed 5 years ago

Update Welcome Screen copy

Categories

(Firefox for Android :: General, defect)

ARM
Android
defect
Not set

Tracking

()

RESOLVED FIXED
Firefox 38
Tracking Status
firefox38 --- fixed

People

(Reporter: liuche, Assigned: liuche)

References

(Blocks 1 open bug)

Details

Attachments

(2 files, 2 obsolete files)

Bug 1064538 has some new copy for the onboarding screens, and we should update the current single-screen version to match that.
Attached image Screenshot: new copy (obsolete) —
The text sizing looks a little different from your mock.
Assignee: nobody → liuche
Flags: needinfo?(alam)
Arcadio, Matej: here's a build you can download and install if you want to see how it looks on a phone. (You'll have to go to the phone's Settings > Apps > fennec liuche to clear the data to prompt the first run if it's been opened before.)

http://people.mozilla.org/~liuche/bug-1131806/copy1.apk

There's also a screenshot attached to this bug.
Blocks: onboarding
Depends on: 1064538
Flags: needinfo?(alainez)
Attached file MozReview Request: bz://1131806/liuche (obsolete) —
/r/3687 - Bug 1131806 - Update Firstrun copy for first screen. r=margaret

Pull down this commit:

hg pull review -r 492039d40ec0b5ffd11d2a64c359513e56685a19
(In reply to Chenxia Liu [:liuche] from comment #1)
> Created attachment 8562361 [details]
> Screenshot: new copy
> 
> The text sizing looks a little different from your mock.

I think that's just the text wrapping funny..

Commented in bug 1131806. We should try "More privacy features and ways to customize than ever." instead. :)
Flags: needinfo?(alam) → needinfo?(liuche)
Thanks, Chenxia. Installing it now.
Flags: needinfo?(alainez)
Summary: Update Firstrun copy for first screen → Update Welcome Screen copy
Attached image Screenshot: new copy v2
Attachment #8562361 - Attachment is obsolete: true
Flags: needinfo?(liuche)
Comment on attachment 8564368 [details]
Screenshot: new copy v2

Anthony, let me know what you think! I can get this landed pretty soon if you like the way this looks.
Attachment #8564368 - Flags: review?(alam)
Comment on attachment 8564368 [details]
Screenshot: new copy v2

WFM!
Attachment #8564368 - Flags: review?(alam) → review+
Comment on attachment 8562365 [details]
MozReview Request: bz://1131806/liuche

/r/3687 - Bug 1131806 - Update Firstrun copy for first screen. r=margaret

Pull down this commit:

hg pull review -r f294abef8d183a73d23aed863655bd081e4d510b
Attachment #8562365 - Flags: review?(margaret.leibovic)
Attachment #8562365 - Flags: review?(margaret.leibovic) → review+
Comment on attachment 8562365 [details]
MozReview Request: bz://1131806/liuche

https://reviewboard.mozilla.org/r/3685/#review3117

Ship It!
One quick question: Why does it say "Fennec" in the strings? I didn't think that was a name we exposed to users.
(In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #12)
> One quick question: Why does it say "Fennec" in the strings? I didn't think
> that was a name we exposed to users.

We just use a variable to specify the branded app name, so on a local build it's "Fennec", but on beta it would be "Firefox Beta" and on release it would be "Firefox". Same goes for that icon we show.
https://hg.mozilla.org/integration/fx-team/rev/6706694c76db
Target Milestone: --- → Firefox 38
(In reply to :Margaret Leibovic from comment #13)
> (In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #12)
> > One quick question: Why does it say "Fennec" in the strings? I didn't think
> > that was a name we exposed to users.
> 
> We just use a variable to specify the branded app name, so on a local build
> it's "Fennec", but on beta it would be "Firefox Beta" and on release it
> would be "Firefox". Same goes for that icon we show.

Got it. Thanks.
https://hg.mozilla.org/mozilla-central/rev/6706694c76db
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Closed: 5 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Attachment #8562365 - Attachment is obsolete: true
Attachment #8619421 - Flags: review+
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