1141295 - Update Hello video to add a snippet about screen sharing

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Marketing :: Video, task)

Description

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

>>Project/Request Title:
Update Hello video to add a snippet about screen sharing

>>Project Overview:
This bug is to update the video which is hosted on the Hello product page to include a piece on screensharing.

This bug will involve updating all of the versions of the video which are localized.

>> Creative Help Needed:
Copy:    No 
Design:  No 
Video:   Yes 
Other:  No

>>Creative Specs:
Delivery of files hosted on our CDN. One for each of the translated locales established in bug 1101985 and bug 1119046.

>>CTA and Design:
Screensharing is live on Nightly. You can also see the current mockups in bug 1137309comment1

>>Expected Launch Date:
2015-05-12

>>Mozilla Goal:
Org Support

>>Mozilla Creative Collective:
No

>>Points of Contact:
[e-mail], [e-mail],

Comment 1

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

Hi Spencer - do you think we can see a first pass at this video by Tuesday?

Comment 2

[Rainer Cvillink]

Her is a rough cut of the Hello video with the screen sharing section (0.38-0.44) this section is NOT polished yet but will give an idea how it will be and let's us play around with the wording. I tried to put in wording from the website copy but was just a bit to long ... however, let the polishing beginnnnnn ...

https://youtu.be/1nGiXqVtKmA

Comment 3

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Rainer Cvillink from comment #2)
> Her is a rough cut of the Hello video with the screen sharing section
> (0.38-0.44) this section is NOT polished yet but will give an idea how it
> will be and let's us play around with the wording. I tried to put in wording
> from the website copy but was just a bit to long ... however, let the
> polishing beginnnnnn ...
> 
> https://youtu.be/1nGiXqVtKmA

Looks good, but is there a missing image at 0:11. I see a white rectangle on a black screen.

Copy looks good, too. Thanks!

Comment 4

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

:flod

Please find the video copy document updated with the addition of the screen sharing string. 

https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/spreadsheets/d/1VNXsdyELR1jX2ObJEPRkpJnaf-RE3A4N7jT3Tin23cQ/edit#gid=0

Will you please share with the appropriate team members?

- Please enter your translation in Row 2 for your language. 
- Enter additional comments in Row 3 for your language.
- A6 has the new string embedded in the English version for reference.
- B10-B20 has the current approved version in the locale languages for reference.

Let me know if there are any questions.

Can we target April 17th for this?

Comment 5

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Sent email to dev-l10n-web
https://groups.google.com/forum/#!topic/mozilla.dev.l10n.web/cApcXn_o7yg

Given the number of involved locales, the process is starting to not scale anymore. If we plan to add more strings to this video, we probably need to start using lang files.

Comment 6

[Michael Köhler [:Coce]]

German (de) added.

Comment 7

[Inma Barrios]

Spanish (es-ES) done.

Comment 8

[Alexander L. Slovesnik]

Russian (ru) is done.

Comment 9

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Japanese (ja) done.

Comment 10

[Mohamed Hafez]

Arabic (ar) is done.

Comment 11

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Thanks Mohamed, asking Youghourta to double check Arabic for consistency since he did the rest of the strings.

Comment 12

[Peter Pin-Guang Chen [:petercpg] (MozTW.org)]

Chinese Traditional (zh-TW) is done.

Comment 13

[Peter Pin-Guang Chen [:petercpg] (MozTW.org)]

(In reply to Peter Pin-Guang Chen [:petercpg] (MozTW.org) from comment #12)
> Chinese Traditional (zh-TW) is done.

By the way, http://youtube.com/watch?v=lITyTXML3as is a private video. Would you mind make it accessible?

Comment 14

[Youghourta Benali]

(In reply to Francesco Lodolo [:flod] (UTC+2) from comment #11)
> Thanks Mohamed, asking Youghourta to double check Arabic for consistency
> since he did the rest of the strings.

Looks good (I tweaked it just a little bit)


thanks

Comment 15

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

(In reply to Peter Pin-Guang Chen [:petercpg] (MozTW.org) from comment #13)
> (In reply to Peter Pin-Guang Chen [:petercpg] (MozTW.org) from comment #12)
> > Chinese Traditional (zh-TW) is done.
> 
> By the way, http://youtube.com/watch?v=lITyTXML3as is a private video. Would
> you mind make it accessible?
Spencer, will you please unlock this video? Thanks

Comment 16

[Rainer Cvillink]

it's unlocked now(In reply to Cory Price [:ckprice] from comment #15)
> (In reply to Peter Pin-Guang Chen [:petercpg] (MozTW.org) from comment #13)
> > (In reply to Peter Pin-Guang Chen [:petercpg] (MozTW.org) from comment #12)
> > > Chinese Traditional (zh-TW) is done.
> > 
> > By the way, http://youtube.com/watch?v=lITyTXML3as is a private video. Would
> > you mind make it accessible?
> Spencer, will you please unlock this video? Thanks

it's unlocked now

Comment 17

[Peter Pin-Guang Chen [:petercpg] (MozTW.org)]

(In reply to Cory Price [:ckprice] from comment #15)
> Spencer, will you please unlock this video? Thanks

Please remind the font of zh-TW video should be changed, as mentioned by Flod in Bug 1101985 comment #24.

Comment 18

[Pascal Chevrel (relman team) -> :pascalc]

I don't know who translated the French version, Théo I guess, but it is OK. Agreed with flod that using lang files would be better if we continue to add strings, at least we can reuse the strings elsewhere once they are in vcs and we know who sent the translation.

Comment 19

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

I didn't write here but Italian is done.

Bartosz, Marcelo, can you take a look since you translated the current version of the video for pl and pt-BR?

Comment 20

[Marcelo Araldi]

pt-BR added =)

Sorry about that delay!

Comment 21

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

(In reply to Marcelo Araldi from comment #20)
> pt-BR added =)
> 
> Sorry about that delay!

Thanks, and you're far from late ;-)

Comment 22

[Joanna Mazgaj]

pl done

Comment 23

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Thanks Joanna.

Cory, looks like we have all the localizations. Can we make sure to address the font issues too for tr and zh-TW?

Comment 24

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

Thanks Flod!

Rainer - will you please begin bringing in the translated versions to the supers? Translations are in comment 4.

Also note comment 17 re: zh-TW fonts, and the comment from the TR team 'Please consider using Fira Sans. It supports Turkish.'

Thanks!

Comment 25

[Rainer Cvillink]

(In reply to Cory Price [:ckprice] from comment #24)
> Thanks Flod!
> 
> Rainer - will you please begin bringing in the translated versions to the
> supers? Translations are in comment 4.
> 
> Also note comment 17 re: zh-TW fonts, and the comment from the TR team
> 'Please consider using Fira Sans. It supports Turkish.'
> 
> Thanks!

We are on it .... we will use fira sans for tr and Heiti TC for ch ....

Thanks for the translations

Comment 26

[Bartosz Piec]

(In reply to Joanna Mazgaj from comment #22)
> pl done

Thanks Joanna! I didn't have time for this…

Comment 27

[Rainer Cvillink]

The translated versions of the Hello video are in the google doc ... pls review ... THX

Comment 28

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

NI myself to ping flod and restructure spreadsheet

Comment 29

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Italian looks good. While waiting for further restructures, I added a row below comments to collect R1 reviews.

Comment 30

[Inma Barrios]

(es-ES) Please add a period:
Comparte tu pantalla durante una conversación >
Comparte tu pantalla durante una conversación.

Comment 31

[Bartosz Piec]

Screen sharing pl string looks good.

Comment 32

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

Hi all,

The spreadsheet is updated.

Please enter your comments in row #3 for your language.

Target date for this is 4/24.

:flod - will you please NI the appropriate members? pl, es and it (thanks!) have checked in.

Thanks!

Comment 33

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Can you provide feedback on the updated video?
https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/spreadsheets/d/1VNXsdyELR1jX2ObJEPRkpJnaf-RE3A4N7jT3Tin23cQ/edit#gid=0

Comment 34

[Selim Şumlu]

A letter (i) is missing in the first screen of the Turkish video.
It should read:
Firefox Hello
ile tanışın

Comment 35

[Youghourta Benali]

Arabic looks good, except one little glitch at 0:15
it should be "ابدأ مُحادثة مُباشرة من خلال فيَرفُكس"

Sorry, I didn't notice it before

Comment 36

[Michael Köhler [:Coce]]

(In reply to Francesco Lodolo [:flod] (UTC+2) from comment #33)
> Can you provide feedback on the updated video?

Sure, why not (r+).

Comment 37

[Théo Chevalier]

French looks good, thanks!

Comment 38

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Looks like the Japanese video link is wrong ;-)

Comment 39

[Peter Pin-Guang Chen [:petercpg] (MozTW.org)]

r+ for zh-TW. Thanks.

Comment 40

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Rainer, can you check the Japanese link?

Comment 41

[Rainer Cvillink]

The Japanses link is fixed

Comment 42

[Alexander L. Slovesnik]

Russian looks good.

Comment 43

[Marcelo Araldi]

Hey guys!

Looks like I've made a typo. There is a phrase "Compartlhe sua tela enquanto conversa" that should be "Compartilhe sua tela enquanto conversa". 

I updated the spreadsheet as well.

Sorry about that!

Comment 44

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Thanks Rainer! I just watched the Japanese clip and left a comment in the spreadsheet on the font issue.

Comment 45

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Feedback complete: 6 OK, 5 in need of a R2.

Comment 46

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

Thanks Flod!

Rainer - please update the non Green video versions and post to the 'R2 Video Link' column.
https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/spreadsheets/d/1VNXsdyELR1jX2ObJEPRkpJnaf-RE3A4N7jT3Tin23cQ/edit#gid=0

Thanks!

Comment 47

[Rainer Cvillink]

All the changes are made and the new links are in the"R2 Video Link" colum.

Please review. THX

Comment 48

[Marcelo Araldi]

Hey there! Brazilian portuguese looks fine now! Thanks! :D

Comment 49

[Inma Barrios]

es-ES looks fine. Thank you guys!

Comment 50

[Selim Şumlu]

Turkish looks fine. Thanks!

Comment 51

[Kohei Yoshino [:kohei]]

Japanese LGTM. Thanks <3

Comment 52

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

(In reply to Youghourta Benali from comment #35)
> Arabic looks good, except one little glitch at 0:15
> it should be "ابدأ مُحادثة مُباشرة من خلال فيَرفُكس"
> 
> Sorry, I didn't notice it before

Hi Youghourta, thank you so much for your feedback!

Will you please check again: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KdRScMHySIw&feature=youtu.be

Comment 53

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

:frios - do you have any comments regarding the visuals for the screen sharing piece? (0:39) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yZqowdENIt8&feature=youtu.be

Comment 54

[Fabio Rios [:frios]]

(In reply to Cory Price [:ckprice] from comment #53)
> :frios - do you have any comments regarding the visuals for the screen
> sharing piece? (0:39)
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yZqowdENIt8&feature=youtu.be

Good job on the time that the screen sharing text remains on screen. Good close up too with websites. Looks good to me. Thanks Cory.

I think I watched it too much. I started focusing on Rainer taking off his glasses while screen sharing. I don't think that's a means for change ;).

Comment 55

[Youghourta Benali]

(In reply to Cory Price [:ckprice] from comment #52)
> (In reply to Youghourta Benali from comment #35)
> > Arabic looks good, except one little glitch at 0:15
> > it should be "ابدأ مُحادثة مُباشرة من خلال فيَرفُكس"
> > 
> > Sorry, I didn't notice it before
> 
> Hi Youghourta, thank you so much for your feedback!
> 
> Will you please check again:
> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KdRScMHySIw&feature=youtu.be

that specific string was fixed, but two other strings appear broken now
would you please give me the link to the translation file so I can fix what need to be fixed?


Thanks

Comment 56

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

I'm pretty sure the translation was done in bug 1119046 on the same Google Doc currently used to add the snippet (and that's why I hate using Google Docs for this kind of things). I tried to go back to previous revisions but can't figure out where the strings were.

If someone has a spreadsheet with all the localized strings currently used, please attach it here in the bug. As already explained, if we need to add more strings to this video, it has to move away from Google Docs.

Comment 57

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Cory, do you have a spreadsheet somewhere with the full en-US script, and possibly the translations we're using?

Comment 58

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

Hi Youghourta -

Firstly, let me apologize for this mix up.

I've invited you to comment on this Google Document: https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/1aSIvPOI9aIltVrGdsIGZT_SLxaiauXq0hImBuB9B5O0/edit?usp=sharing

Will you please check it out, and ensure we have the correct strings?

:flod - I agree this is not optimal, and we will no longer use after this campaign. As we've gotten sign off from all other reviewers (https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1VNXsdyELR1jX2ObJEPRkpJnaf-RE3A4N7jT3Tin23cQ/edit#gid=1933633754), let's try to get Arabic sorted.

Thanks all.

Comment 59

[Rainer Cvillink]

I want to apologize as well because I think this was caused by a font change in the editing software.

Sorry
Rainer

Comment 60

[Youghourta Benali]

(In reply to Cory Price [:ckprice] from comment #58)
> Hi Youghourta -
> 
> Firstly, let me apologize for this mix up.
> 
> I've invited you to comment on this Google Document:
> https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/
> 1aSIvPOI9aIltVrGdsIGZT_SLxaiauXq0hImBuB9B5O0/edit?usp=sharing
> 
> Will you please check it out, and ensure we have the correct strings?
> 
> :flod - I agree this is not optimal, and we will no longer use after this
> campaign. As we've gotten sign off from all other reviewers
> (https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1VNXsdyELR1jX2ObJEPRkpJnaf-
> RE3A4N7jT3Tin23cQ/edit#gid=1933633754), let's try to get Arabic sorted.
> 
> Thanks all.

All the strings in this file are correct

Please, let me know when you update the video so I can check it again

BTW, the last string (يستخدم) should be put at the right of Telefonica Logo (Arabic is a RTL language)

Comment 61

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

(In reply to Youghourta Benali from comment #60)
> (In reply to Cory Price [:ckprice] from comment #58)
> > Hi Youghourta -
> > 
> > Firstly, let me apologize for this mix up.
> > 
> > I've invited you to comment on this Google Document:
> > https://docs.google.com/a/mozilla.com/document/d/
> > 1aSIvPOI9aIltVrGdsIGZT_SLxaiauXq0hImBuB9B5O0/edit?usp=sharing
> > 
> > Will you please check it out, and ensure we have the correct strings?
> > 
> > :flod - I agree this is not optimal, and we will no longer use after this
> > campaign. As we've gotten sign off from all other reviewers
> > (https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/1VNXsdyELR1jX2ObJEPRkpJnaf-
> > RE3A4N7jT3Tin23cQ/edit#gid=1933633754), let's try to get Arabic sorted.
> > 
> > Thanks all.
> 
> All the strings in this file are correct
> 
> Please, let me know when you update the video so I can check it again
> 
> BTW, the last string (يستخدم) should be put at the right of Telefonica Logo
> (Arabic is a RTL language)
Thank you so much Youghourta!

Rainer - please post the updated video, noting the comment about the last string and Telefonica logo.

Comment 62

[Rainer Cvillink]

all changes made .... I hope .... pls check, I am running into some strange things in FinalCutPro ... font is Heiti TC ..... added it to the google doc as well ...

https://youtu.be/HjAUzFbjnG4

Comment 63

[Cory Price [:ckprice] (bugmail disabled, NI me!)]

Youghourta - please see link when you have a chance. Thanks!

Comment 64

[Youghourta Benali]

all strings seem correct now