Add a slide 'title' to the 'sign into firefox' screen from the first-run tour

RESOLVED FIXED

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Firefox for iOS
General
RESOLVED FIXED
2 years ago
2 years ago

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(Reporter: kar, Assigned: jhugman)

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iOS
Dependency tree / graph

Firefox Tracking Flags

(fxios1.1+)

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(Whiteboard: [needs strings])

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(Reporter)

Description

2 years ago
For consistency, can we add a title to the 'connect Firefox everywhere you use it' slide since all the other slides has a title?

(very much) desired for 1.1 and would need this locked down for a string freeze soon.
tracking-fxios: ? → 1.1+
Flags: needinfo?(alam)
Whiteboard: [needs strings]
Originally we removed the title to make room for the CTA button. That kept the overall layout's across each slide consistent. The problem with adding a title would be increasing the height substantially for one of the slides.

But, perhaps we can change the copy here to be in the same style as the title of the other slides. I.e. Bold. We might have to shorten it a bit? that way, this slide would still be in the same format as the others. 

Thoughts?
Flags: needinfo?(krudnitski)
Flags: needinfo?(dhenein)
Flags: needinfo?(alam)
Created attachment 8661464 [details]
First Run V1 - Slide 3@1x.png

I'll need some help with my horrible copy but this is what I was thinking.

Matej, care to chime in? :)
Flags: needinfo?(matej)
(Reporter)

Comment 3

2 years ago
I can see the rationale for sure, although the OCD in me felt it so disjointed not to have a consistent feel (and especially now we're adding in more panels!)

I appreciate trying to appeal to this consistency. 

The worry I have without providing much more context or benefit to the 'connect everyone' slide is that the CTA brings the user to the setting page where we don't provide any further context or benefits for connecting.

Maybe some slightly tighter copy and/or modifying the image to show Firefox across other devices? ie a pic of a desktop screen and a tablet as well? Just to provide a bit of a stronger clue.
Flags: needinfo?(krudnitski)

Comment 4

2 years ago
Here are some other options we could try here:

Connect Firefox everywhere

Take your Web with you

Sync Firefox wherever you use it
Flags: needinfo?(matej)
(In reply to Karen Rudnitski [:kar] from comment #3)
> I can see the rationale for sure, although the OCD in me felt it so
> disjointed not to have a consistent feel (and especially now we're adding in
> more panels!)
> 
> I appreciate trying to appeal to this consistency. 
> 
> The worry I have without providing much more context or benefit to the
> 'connect everyone' slide is that the CTA brings the user to the setting page
> where we don't provide any further context or benefits for connecting.

I think the slides leading up to this should give the context and value proposition here :)
 
> Maybe some slightly tighter copy and/or modifying the image to show Firefox
> across other devices? ie a pic of a desktop screen and a tablet as well?
> Just to provide a bit of a stronger clue.

Sure, I can give the imagery some more tries. I agree, we can show more than just a phone!
Created attachment 8661949 [details]
Screen Shot 2015-09-16 at 11.04.29 AM.png

(In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #4)
> Here are some other options we could try here:
> 
> Connect Firefox everywhere
> 
> Take your Web with you
> 
> Sync Firefox wherever you use it

Check it out Matej! This would be the current flow but we are adding additional slides. 

Thoughts?
Flags: needinfo?(matej)

Comment 7

2 years ago
Looking at that, what if it just said "Sync"? That would flow with the other titles and it's both the name of the feature and descriptive.

I also wonder if we want to update the image on that third slide to show multiple devices and better communicate the benefit. Right now it looks like Sync provides backup service, which it really doesn't.
Flags: needinfo?(matej)
I kinda like just saying Sync, with a clearer illustration showing the Sync benefit (my stuff across devices)...
Flags: needinfo?(dhenein)
Yep, I left a note in comment 5 to do just that.

But looking at bug 1203563, we need to unify all these titles. Seeing as how we're going with "Sync" here in the final slide. Do we still want "Send to Firefox" and "Make it your browser" for slides 3 and 4?
Flags: needinfo?(matej)
(In reply to Anthony Lam (:antlam) from comment #9)
> Yep, I left a note in comment 5 to do just that.
> 
> But looking at bug 1203563, we need to unify all these titles. Seeing as how
> we're going with "Sync" here in the final slide. Do we still want "Send to
> Firefox" and "Make it your browser" for slides 3 and 4?

Would it be possible to put this all in one place so we can figure it out holistically, rather than in two different bugs?
Flags: needinfo?(matej)
Definitely, this is a bit disjointed but I think we're pretty pressed with time in this case :\

Let's do this for now:
 - leave this one open for changing the copy of the last slide to "Sync"
 - Update the copy of slide 3 and 4 in bug 1203563
(In reply to Anthony Lam (:antlam) from comment #11)
> Definitely, this is a bit disjointed but I think we're pretty pressed with
> time in this case :\
> 
> Let's do this for now:
>  - leave this one open for changing the copy of the last slide to "Sync"
>  - Update the copy of slide 3 and 4 in bug 1203563

I was hoping to be able to see all the screens together, but I can review in the other bug. Thanks.
Status: NEW → ASSIGNED
Matej, all tour slides in one image: https://bug1203563.bmoattachments.org/attachment.cgi?id=8662096
Flags: needinfo?(matej)
We are too late for a 'Sync' string, but we have 'Sync your Devices'. Would that work?
Flags: needinfo?(dhenein)
(In reply to Stefan Arentz [:st3fan] from comment #13)
> Matej, all tour slides in one image:
> https://bug1203563.bmoattachments.org/attachment.cgi?id=8662096

Looks great. Thanks.
Flags: needinfo?(matej)
We are past string freeze, so how about we start with 'Sync your Devices.' and for a later release change it to 'Sync'. There is nothing we can do in terms of new strings at this point, so the only other option is to not use a title.

This bug needs a decision so that we can implement it :-)
Flags: needinfo?(matej)
(In reply to Stefan Arentz [:st3fan] from comment #16)
> We are past string freeze, so how about we start with 'Sync your Devices.'
> and for a later release change it to 'Sync'. There is nothing we can do in
> terms of new strings at this point, so the only other option is to not use a
> title.
> 
> This bug needs a decision so that we can implement it :-)

Since the choice is about including a headline or not, and not about copy, I don't think the decision is mine, but if we do include it, the D should be lowercase: Sync you devices
Flags: needinfo?(matej)
(Assignee)

Updated

2 years ago
Assignee: dhenein → jhugman
(Assignee)

Comment 18

2 years ago
Created attachment 8673715 [details] [review]
Pull request
Attachment #8673715 - Flags: review?(etoop)
(Assignee)

Comment 19

2 years ago
Created attachment 8673717 [details]
Simulator Screen Shot Oct 14, 2015, 4.44.43 PM.png

"Sync your devices" screenshot.
Attachment #8673717 - Flags: ui-review?(alam)
Comment on attachment 8673717 [details]
Simulator Screen Shot Oct 14, 2015, 4.44.43 PM.png

Sweet! 

I can't see the other slides... 

But as long as the Title is in the same place as the others, this works!
Attachment #8673717 - Flags: ui-review?(alam) → ui-review+
Comment on attachment 8673715 [details] [review]
Pull request

Return the title label to the already localised string and raise a bug to properly capitilise it for 1.1.x.
Attachment #8673715 - Flags: review?(etoop) → review+
Sync your devices WFM
Flags: needinfo?(dhenein)
(Assignee)

Comment 23

2 years ago
Addressed nits, and landed.

Follow up bug https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1215286
(Assignee)

Updated

2 years ago
Status: ASSIGNED → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 2 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
Blocks: 1215286
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