1203560 - Add a slide 'title' to the 'sign into firefox' screen from the first-run tour

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Firefox for iOS :: General, defect)

Description

[Karen Rudnitski [:kar]]

For consistency, can we add a title to the 'connect Firefox everywhere you use it' slide since all the other slides has a title?

(very much) desired for 1.1 and would need this locked down for a string freeze soon.

Comment 1

[Anthony Lam (:antlam) Find me, @antlam on Slack!]

Originally we removed the title to make room for the CTA button. That kept the overall layout's across each slide consistent. The problem with adding a title would be increasing the height substantially for one of the slides.

But, perhaps we can change the copy here to be in the same style as the title of the other slides. I.e. Bold. We might have to shorten it a bit? that way, this slide would still be in the same format as the others. 

Thoughts?

Comment 2

[Anthony Lam (:antlam) Find me, @antlam on Slack!]

Attachment: First Run V1 - Slide [e-mail]

I'll need some help with my horrible copy but this is what I was thinking.

Matej, care to chime in? :)

Comment 3

[Karen Rudnitski [:kar]]

I can see the rationale for sure, although the OCD in me felt it so disjointed not to have a consistent feel (and especially now we're adding in more panels!)

I appreciate trying to appeal to this consistency. 

The worry I have without providing much more context or benefit to the 'connect everyone' slide is that the CTA brings the user to the setting page where we don't provide any further context or benefits for connecting.

Maybe some slightly tighter copy and/or modifying the image to show Firefox across other devices? ie a pic of a desktop screen and a tablet as well? Just to provide a bit of a stronger clue.

Comment 4

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Here are some other options we could try here:

Connect Firefox everywhere

Take your Web with you

Sync Firefox wherever you use it

Comment 5

[Anthony Lam (:antlam) Find me, @antlam on Slack!]

(In reply to Karen Rudnitski [:kar] from comment #3)
> I can see the rationale for sure, although the OCD in me felt it so
> disjointed not to have a consistent feel (and especially now we're adding in
> more panels!)
> 
> I appreciate trying to appeal to this consistency. 
> 
> The worry I have without providing much more context or benefit to the
> 'connect everyone' slide is that the CTA brings the user to the setting page
> where we don't provide any further context or benefits for connecting.

I think the slides leading up to this should give the context and value proposition here :)
 
> Maybe some slightly tighter copy and/or modifying the image to show Firefox
> across other devices? ie a pic of a desktop screen and a tablet as well?
> Just to provide a bit of a stronger clue.

Sure, I can give the imagery some more tries. I agree, we can show more than just a phone!

Comment 6

[Anthony Lam (:antlam) Find me, @antlam on Slack!]

Attachment: Screen Shot 2015-09-16 at 11.04.29 AM.png

(In reply to Matej Novak [:matej] from comment #4)
> Here are some other options we could try here:
> 
> Connect Firefox everywhere
> 
> Take your Web with you
> 
> Sync Firefox wherever you use it

Check it out Matej! This would be the current flow but we are adding additional slides. 

Thoughts?

Comment 7

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Looking at that, what if it just said "Sync"? That would flow with the other titles and it's both the name of the feature and descriptive.

I also wonder if we want to update the image on that third slide to show multiple devices and better communicate the benefit. Right now it looks like Sync provides backup service, which it really doesn't.

Comment 8

[Darrin Henein [:darrin]]

I kinda like just saying Sync, with a clearer illustration showing the Sync benefit (my stuff across devices)...

Comment 9

[Anthony Lam (:antlam) Find me, @antlam on Slack!]

Yep, I left a note in comment 5 to do just that.

But looking at bug 1203563, we need to unify all these titles. Seeing as how we're going with "Sync" here in the final slide. Do we still want "Send to Firefox" and "Make it your browser" for slides 3 and 4?

Comment 10

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Anthony Lam (:antlam) from comment #9)
> Yep, I left a note in comment 5 to do just that.
> 
> But looking at bug 1203563, we need to unify all these titles. Seeing as how
> we're going with "Sync" here in the final slide. Do we still want "Send to
> Firefox" and "Make it your browser" for slides 3 and 4?

Would it be possible to put this all in one place so we can figure it out holistically, rather than in two different bugs?

Comment 11

[Anthony Lam (:antlam) Find me, @antlam on Slack!]

Definitely, this is a bit disjointed but I think we're pretty pressed with time in this case :\

Let's do this for now:
 - leave this one open for changing the copy of the last slide to "Sync"
 - Update the copy of slide 3 and 4 in bug 1203563

Comment 12

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Anthony Lam (:antlam) from comment #11)
> Definitely, this is a bit disjointed but I think we're pretty pressed with
> time in this case :\
> 
> Let's do this for now:
>  - leave this one open for changing the copy of the last slide to "Sync"
>  - Update the copy of slide 3 and 4 in bug 1203563

I was hoping to be able to see all the screens together, but I can review in the other bug. Thanks.

Comment 13

[Stefan Arentz | :st3fan | ⏰ EST | he/him]

Matej, all tour slides in one image: https://bug1203563.bmoattachments.org/attachment.cgi?id=8662096

Comment 14

[Stefan Arentz | :st3fan | ⏰ EST | he/him]

We are too late for a 'Sync' string, but we have 'Sync your Devices'. Would that work?

Comment 15

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Stefan Arentz [:st3fan] from comment #13)
> Matej, all tour slides in one image:
> https://bug1203563.bmoattachments.org/attachment.cgi?id=8662096

Looks great. Thanks.

Comment 16

[Stefan Arentz | :st3fan | ⏰ EST | he/him]

We are past string freeze, so how about we start with 'Sync your Devices.' and for a later release change it to 'Sync'. There is nothing we can do in terms of new strings at this point, so the only other option is to not use a title.

This bug needs a decision so that we can implement it :-)

Comment 17

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

(In reply to Stefan Arentz [:st3fan] from comment #16)
> We are past string freeze, so how about we start with 'Sync your Devices.'
> and for a later release change it to 'Sync'. There is nothing we can do in
> terms of new strings at this point, so the only other option is to not use a
> title.
> 
> This bug needs a decision so that we can implement it :-)

Since the choice is about including a headline or not, and not about copy, I don't think the decision is mine, but if we do include it, the D should be lowercase: Sync you devices

Comment 18

[James Hugman [:jhugman] [@jhugman]]

Attachment: Pull request

Comment 19

[James Hugman [:jhugman] [@jhugman]]

Attachment: Simulator Screen Shot Oct 14, 2015, 4.44.43 PM.png

"Sync your devices" screenshot.

Comment 20

[Anthony Lam (:antlam) Find me, @antlam on Slack!]

Comment on attachment 8673717 [details]
Simulator Screen Shot Oct 14, 2015, 4.44.43 PM.png

Sweet! 

I can't see the other slides... 

But as long as the Title is in the same place as the others, this works!

Comment 21

[Emily Toop (:fluffyemily)]

Comment on attachment 8673715 [details] [review]
Pull request

Return the title label to the already localised string and raise a bug to properly capitilise it for 1.1.x.

Comment 22

[Robin Andersen [:tecgirl]]

Sync your devices WFM

Comment 23

[James Hugman [:jhugman] [@jhugman]]

Addressed nits, and landed.

Follow up bug https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/show_bug.cgi?id=1215286