1206949 - [Marketing][screenshots][de]: FF for iOS appstore

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Mozilla Localizations :: de / German, defect)

Description

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hi Tannie,

Please see the localized strings for iOS app store in v1.1:
https://l10n.mozilla-community.org/~pascalc/stores_l10n/locale/da/apple/release/

Scroll to the section that says "Screenshots".  Another feature is that if you leave your mouse to a line of text, a popup window will show the English content so you will copy the correct text.  

Once you are done, post the link (not sure about the process) here and give Michael and Sebastian access to review.

Given the deadline for all these languages (per email discussion) in middle of October, let's finish this soon so we can move on to other locales.

Thanks,
Peiying

Thanks,
Peiying

Comment 1

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

https://l10n.mozilla-community.org/~pascalc/stores_l10n/locale/fr/apple/release/

Comment 2

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

argh, wrong window - German - https://l10n.mozilla-community.org/~pascalc/stores_l10n/locale/de/apple/release/

Comment 3

[Tannie Low]

DE screens ready for review: https://app.box.com/s/zwo8pe6q1okuhlyi46gix4vkn1w2m8xz

Comment 4

[Sebastian Hengst [:aryx] (needinfo me if it's about an intermittent or backout)]

Thanks, I see no issue with these. Would just have preferred if the ones with the big button had the graphics text also localized (they are so big that people will read them).

Comment 5

[Tannie Low]

I have the buttons - but don't believe we're localizing any of the screen text. 

I'll see if perhaps we can localize the App Store button!

Comment 6

[Michael Köhler [:Coce]]

Thanks, I have nothing to add to Aryx’ comment.

Comment 7

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Hello again,

The marketing content in the screenshots have been reviewed an approved.  The purpose of this round of review is to make sure the product screenshots in the composite images have the correct languages.  Please keep in mind of the following during this review:

- It is normal to have both English and your language in the mix of the screenshots.  Is it your locale?
- The *keyboard* is correct for your locale
- DO NOT compare your locale with other locales.  Some product shots of web sites may or may not be the same.  This is not a mistake.
- The *Fast-Phone-Website* screenshot is still being worked on as we speak.  This will come in on Wednesday during your day time. Look for updates from Tannie when this is completed.

*File location*: https://app.box.com/s/4wwy7luf9k434t9r841lqamnbi4pktgq/1/4697286306
*Deadline*: Oct 21 PDT.  Apologize for not leaving much time for this final sign off.  This is meant for a final look on language matching accuracy.  We hope there are no corrections needed.

Comment 8

[Sebastian Hengst [:aryx] (needinfo me if it's about an intermittent or backout)]

https://app.box.com/s/4wwy7luf9k434t9r841lqamnbi4pktgq/1/5072761662/41049770558/1
https://app.box.com/s/4wwy7luf9k434t9r841lqamnbi4pktgq/1/5072760730/41049751126/1
Here the search engines bar covers the top row of the keyboard (the user wouldn't be able to type). This looks okay in the 6+ version: https://app.box.com/s/4wwy7luf9k434t9r841lqamnbi4pktgq/1/5072764170/41049782270/1

https://app.box.com/s/4wwy7luf9k434t9r841lqamnbi4pktgq/1/5072760054/41049743382/1
Keyboard is uppercase and English (qwerty) but should be German (qwertz)

https://app.box.com/s/4wwy7luf9k434t9r841lqamnbi4pktgq/1/5072758306/41049739646/1
First thumbnail in second row has google url but support.mozilla.org content.

Maybe Coce has something to add.

Comment 9

[Michael Köhler [:Coce]]

Thanks, the Fastphone screenshots all have the URL <https://www.mozilla.org/firefox/ios> which should normally not appear in the URL bar, because it redirects to the locale’s page (in our case <https://www.mozilla.org/de/firefox/ios/>).

Comment 10

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Mike, issues found in the product screenshots you provided.  Please comment here. Incorrect keyboard is a main issue.

Comment 11

[[e-mail]]

Regarding iPhone 6+ "search" screenshot in german ie the keyboard issue, the screenshot I provided Tannie is correct, I think there may have been some post production issues. 

Tannie - can you look at this?

Comment 12

[Tannie Low]

All sync images in every locale have been updated, resolving the keyboard issue!

Also updated, FFx-iOS_iPad-Air-horz_DE-Fast-Phone-Website: https://app.box.com/s/e5546bhitbxekzmszn7pqbqdq9omgjzi
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Comment 13

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Sebastian and Michael, please review one more time.  The URL won't be changed at this point. Please confirm the corrections in others.

Comment 14

[Sebastian Hengst [:aryx] (needinfo me if it's about an intermittent or backout)]

Issue in all sizes: The page displayed to download the app has the label

"""
Laden im
App Store
"""

This isn't proper German. Use

"""
Download im
App Store
"""
(download in the app store)

or

"""
Erhältlich im
App Store
"""
(available in the app store)
Example: http://metat.net/img/erhaeltlich_im_appstore.png

Comment 15

[[e-mail]]

Sebastian,

That is the asset directly from Apple's website. 

Can you help us find a high res version of the badge we should use, otherwise we will default to what is provided by Apple.

Comment 16

[Sebastian Hengst [:aryx] (needinfo me if it's about an intermittent or backout)]

Okay, found it: https://developer.apple.com/app-store/marketing/guidelines/de/#downloadOnAppstore

If the users are used to that badge, it's fine (Apple literally shortened "download" to "load" here, [but the word also means "store"]).

Comment 17

[[e-mail]]

okay, we'll keep the existing badge.  Thanks for the quick feedback!

Comment 18

[Peiying Mo [:CocoMo]]

Thanks everyone for the quick resolution.  Since no change is needed, we are closing the bug.