1376521 - Updates to 56 Onboarding Tour Overlay Headlines and Body Copy

Status: VERIFIED FIXED

(Firefox :: General, defect, P2)

Description

[mheubusch]

Per feedback from legal review and content strategy review please update the tour Overlay headlines and copy (note that overlay headlines will match notification headlines now).  Navigation labels and button labels do not change. Updated copy for all panels is below.  

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Comment 1

[mheubusch]

Hi Flod - just calling to your attention that the new headlines here are already in the notifications portion of the tour, so my hope is less to localize.  Will localizers see that, or should I put in a localization note for each headline?

Comment 2

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

(In reply to mheubusch from comment #1)
> Hi Flod - just calling to your attention that the new headlines here are
> already in the notifications portion of the tour, so my hope is less to
> localize.  Will localizers see that, or should I put in a localization note
> for each headline?

No need, translation memory in their tools should help them here.

Comment 3

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

On a side note: we exposed these strings for localization not long ago, and they're not the typical strings you would find in Firefox (harder to translate properly). Now we're asking localizers to redo this work, it's painful. 

We should really try to improve the process and have these reviews (legal, content strategy) before we land code.

Comment 4

[[e-mail]]

I've confirmed with verdi that the notification part has go through legal and content strategy review, so all we need is update the tour related strings here.

Will also add localization notification descriptions mentioned in bug 1357641 comment 58.

Comment 5

[[e-mail]]

Attachment: Bug 1376521 - Updates to 56 Onboarding Tour Overlay Headlines and Body Copy;

Review commit: https://reviewboard.mozilla.org/r/153448/diff/#index_header
See other reviews: https://reviewboard.mozilla.org/r/153448/

Comment 6

[[e-mail]]

Here's the screencast with new string http://recordit.co/OsftWO1TD5

or in gif http://g.recordit.co/OsftWO1TD5.gif

Comment 7

[Dave Townsend [:mossop]]

Comment on attachment 8882347 [details]
Bug 1376521 - Updates to 56 Onboarding Tour Overlay Headlines and Body Copy;

https://reviewboard.mozilla.org/r/153448/#review158814

::: browser/extensions/onboarding/locales/en-US/onboarding.properties:19
(Diff revision 1)
>  # LOCALIZATION NOTE (onboarding.tour-search.description): If Amazon is not part
>  # of the default searchplugins for your locale, you can replace it with another
>  # ecommerce website (if you're shipping one), but not with a general purpose
>  # search engine (Google, Bing, Yandex, etc.). Alternatively, only reference
>  # Wikipedia and drop Amazon from the text.
> -onboarding.tour-search.description=Having a default search engine doesn’t mean it’s the only one you use. Pick a search engine or a site, like Amazon or Wikipedia, to search on the fly.
> +onboarding.tour-search.description2=Having a default search engine doesn’t mean it’s the only one you can use. Choose a search engine or a site, like Amazon or WIkipedia, right from the search box.

Bad capitalization on Wikipedia

Comment 8

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Comment on attachment 8882347 [details]
Bug 1376521 - Updates to 56 Onboarding Tour Overlay Headlines and Body Copy;

https://reviewboard.mozilla.org/r/153448/#review158828

::: browser/extensions/onboarding/locales/en-US/onboarding.properties:14
(Diff revision 1)
> -# LOCALIZATION NOTE(onboarding.notification-icon-tool-tip): %S is brandShortName.
> +# LOCALIZATION NOTE(onboarding.notification-icon-tool-tip): This string will be used to show the tooltip alongside the notification icon. %S is brandShortName.
>  onboarding.notification-icon-tool-tip=New to %S?
>  
> -onboarding.tour-search=One-Click Search
> -onboarding.tour-search.title=Find the needle or the haystack.
> +onboarding.tour-search2=Search
> +onboarding.tour-search.title2=Find it faster.
>  # LOCALIZATION NOTE (onboarding.tour-search.description): If Amazon is not part

Need to update the ID reference here

Comment 9

[[e-mail]]

Comment on attachment 8882347 [details]
Bug 1376521 - Updates to 56 Onboarding Tour Overlay Headlines and Body Copy;

Review request updated; see interdiff: https://reviewboard.mozilla.org/r/153448/diff/1-2/

Comment 10

[[e-mail]]

issue addressed, thanks!

Comment 11

[Pulsebot]

Pushed by [e-mail]:
https://hg.mozilla.org/integration/autoland/rev/cb9e6f5a0704
Updates to 56 Onboarding Tour Overlay Headlines and Body Copy;r=mossop

Comment 12

[Phil Ringnalda (:philor)]

https://hg.mozilla.org/mozilla-central/rev/cb9e6f5a0704

Comment 13

[Justin [:JW_SoftvisionQA]]

https://bugzilla.mozilla.org/user_profile?login=info.saddamxm%40gmail.com