471489 - Tracking bug for translation of Mozilla Europe Privacy Policy

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Websites Graveyard :: mozilla-europe.org, defect)

Description

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc]

This is a tracking bug for the translation of Mozilla Europe privacy policy located at http://www.mozilla-europe.org/en/about/privacy/

The translation will be done by Mozilla Europe localization team but any help is of course welcome.

The reference version is:

http://viewvc.svn.mozilla.org/vc/projects/mozilla-europe.org/trunk/en/about/privacy/index.html?revision=21297&content-type=text%2Fplain

This is the privacy policy as written for Mozilla Europe in 'December 2008' (rev 21297 on SVN).

Comment 1

[Reed Loden [:reed]]

Wait, we just consolidated the privacy policies between mozilla.org and mozilla.com... do we really need yet another privacy policy for mozilla-europe.org?

Comment 2

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc]

Yes, it's a legal requirement in Europe and the text is different to accomodate European laws.

Comment 3

[Reed Loden [:reed]]

    <p>Mozilla will use the web analytics data only to determine aggregate usage patterns for our Web sites as described above. The Mozilla Web sites do this by using either its own internal analytics software or by sending this information to a third-party service provider to help Mozilla analyze this data and the Mozilla Web sites using third-party web analytics tools are listed here.

The "here" should be |<a href="http://www.mozilla.com/third-party.html">here</a>|.

Comment 4

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc]

thanks, Reed, updated in r21340

Comment 5

[Besnik Bleta]

Translated and svn commites, rev. 21363, for sq.

Comment 6

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc]

thanks Besnik, that was fast ! :) it is on production

Comment 7

[Eduard Gamonal]

Attachment: Catalan (ca) localisation for mozilla-europe's privacy police.

Catalan (ca) localisation for mozilla-europe's privacy police

Comment 8

[Eduard Gamonal]

Comment on attachment 355211 [details]
Catalan (ca) localisation for mozilla-europe's privacy police. 

Thanks to Diana Coromines for the revision :)

Comment 9

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc]

edu, when your translation is reviewed and final, you can commit it to svn and send a message to the mailing list for publication.

Comment 10

[Michael Köhler [:Coce]]

Do we also need to translate the Mozilla pages the privacy policy links to?
<http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/legal/privacy/firefox-en.html>
<http://www.mozilla.com/third-party.html>
<http://www.mozilla.com/en-US/opt-out.html>

Comment 11

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc]

no, only Mozilla Europe privacy policy, not the pages it points to on other mozilla sites.

Comment 12

[George Fiotakis]

A few points about the document :
1 ."When you use visit the Mozilla web sites and use our services, you agree that:"
Shouldn't we have a comma after "use" (or a slash) or even loose "use" all in all in the "use visit..." part?

2."You can determine when this privacy policy was last revised by referring to the "Last Updated” legend at the top of this page."
Is that a reference to some kind of menu that we'll have on the top or what? it doesn't make sense in the page as it is now.

3. Personally, i believe that the opt-out page should be translated along with the policy. Is it ok if i provide a translation for the international site?

Comment 13

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc]

1: yes 'use' is redondant, we should drop it
2: it refers to the date 'December 2008' below the title
3: you can translate the page but it will be your responsability to keep it up to date on mozilla.com when the en-US version is modified because I don't intend to track changes an inform localizers when there are changes on this page

Comment 14

[George Fiotakis]

(In reply to comment #13)
> 2: it refers to the date 'December 2008' below the title
Thanks for clearing this up. I guess in that case we should add "Last updated: " before the date to make it clear for the users too.
> 3: you can translate the page but it will be your responsability to keep it up
> to date on mozilla.com when the en-US version is modified because I don't
> intend to track changes an inform localizers when there are changes on this
> page
Well understood and accepted.
Translation for el is done, waiting for a review  now and i hope i'll update in svn 'till friday.

Comment 15

[Vlado Valastiak [:wladow]]

Done for sk, rev. 21502

Comment 16

[George Fiotakis]

submitted revision 21514 for el.

Comment 17

[Julen Ruiz Aizpuru]

Attachment: Basque (eu) translation of the mozilla-europe privacy policy

Please upload it. Thanks.

Comment 18

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc]

Thanks Julen! this is uploaded and published

Comment 19

[Henrik Skupin [:whimboo][⌚️UTC+1]]

Ok, just to note. The German version is ready and already published by Pascal.

Comment 20

[Francesco Lodolo [:flod]]

Italian version is already published (still appears as a pending bug in the web dashboard).

Comment 21

[Pascal Chevrel:pascalc]

thanks for noticing Francesco, I have updated the web dashboard.

Comment 22

[Kalman Kemenczy]

Attachment: Hungarian translation of Mozilla Europe Privacy Policy

Comment 23

[Tim Babych]

Ukrainian is translated, checked in and proofread.

Comment 24

[Jussi Bergström]

Done for fi, r27351

Comment 25

[Carlos Simao]

done for pt-PT rev.27734

Comment 26

[Rimas Kudelis [use needinfo to ping]]

Done for lt in r73313.
I deliberately changed occurences "privacy AT mozilla-europe DOT org" to an actual link. I believe this type of email obfuscation is long since became useless, and I assume we have spam filters anyway.