650405 - [WebifyMe] Copy Changes in the questions copy and end page copy

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(Websites :: webifyme.org, defect, P1)

Description

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

Attachment: webifyme-endpage-changes mockup

Hi All, 

Per Mayumi's request, Williamr and I reviewed the end page, (page after you answer the questions and before you see your image results). We made a few changes in the copy to make it a little bit more personable and more user friendly. William did a mock-up of the page and changes (see attachment). 

In addition, we also found several minor copy changes in the quiz. I've attached a word doc and highlighted the changes in the copy. 

I don't anticipate any additional copy changes in the questions after this, however, I would like to stress out that these changes need to happen by end of day Monday in order to start the localization process.

Thanks!

Comment 1

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

Attachment: Webifyme Copy Changes in the quiz

Comment 2

[Grace Jimenez :grace]

I will also create a separate bug for the copy changes in descriptions for the objects shortly.

Comment 3

[[:brez]]

Updated:

a89a316 [2 hours ago] (brez) additional copy change for bug 650946

Comment 4

[[:brez]]

This can be closed - finished yesterday but not able to close

Comment 5

[William Reynolds [:williamr]]

Reopening this since the copy/layout changes for the end of quiz page haven't made it to stage yet. See comment 0 and the mockup attached to the bug for how that form should be updated. Thanks!

Comment 6

[[:brez]]

I missed the first attachment doing it now - one note though abt L18n for [NAME]' s things is that the apostrophe to denote possession is specific to English and won't translate, e.g a spanish translation of "brez's things" would translate as "Las cosas de brez"  i.e. que debemos hacer?   (needs to be re-thought)

Comment 7

[[:brez]]

Added new copy, etc.  When/if we rethink the possession clause, just reopen

Comment 8

[William Reynolds [:williamr]]

Matej, any suggestions for brez's point in comment 6 about localizing a possessive.

Currently, the user fills out the 'Personalize your collage' form after answering the quiz. What they put in the the 'Title' field then becomes "[Title]'s Things". 

Is there a simple way we can rework how the Title value from the form is used in the title so it's more localization friendly? We could also rename the Title field on the form if there's a better way to phrase how it's used.

Comment 9

[Matej Novak [:matej]]

Could we just take out "'s Things" and let them title it whatever they want?

Other suggestions:

• two fields: one for their name and one for the title

• after the field do something like "— My Things" (i.e. Matej Novak — My Things)

• make if part of a sentence: "I'm [NAME] and these are my things."

Any of those work?

Comment 10

[William Reynolds [:williamr]]

Thanks Matej! Reopening while we decide if/how to reword this.

Comment 11

[William Reynolds [:williamr]]

Let's rework how the title is stored after the user inputs. This doesn't affect the form itself but just how we store/display the title.

Old format: [Title]'s Things
New format: [Title] — My Things

Comment 12

[William Reynolds [:williamr]]

Correction to comment 11, I wrote Things instead of Web:

Old format: [Title]'s Web
New format: [Title] — My Web

I've submitted a pull request for review. From what I can tell, this string only appears in the collage.html template.

Comment 13

[Austin King [:ozten]]

r+
https://github.com/dailycavalier/webifyme/commit/a5c9e06e90ba024e

Comment 14

[William Reynolds [:williamr]]

Closing per comment 13