Add a customization option in the first-run tour 'customization' slide

VERIFIED FIXED

Status

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VERIFIED FIXED
3 years ago
3 years ago

People

(Reporter: krudnitski, Assigned: dhenein)

Tracking

unspecified
Other
iOS
Dependency tree / graph

Firefox Tracking Flags

(fxios1.1+)

Details

Attachments

(1 attachment, 1 obsolete attachment)

(Reporter)

Description

3 years ago
Rework the copy in the 'Customize' slide in the first-run tour to include a possible option for customization. Feedback suggests that people didn't know they could change their search engine, so this could be a good candidate as an option for customizing. 

Darrin, Matej - looking to you both for reworking the copy a little to reflect this option (Darrin is on point). (very much) desired for 1.1 and would need this locked down for a string freeze soon.
tracking-fxios: ? → 1.1+
(Assignee)

Updated

3 years ago
Flags: needinfo?(alam)
Whiteboard: [needs strings]
(Assignee)

Comment 1

3 years ago
Pre-landing strings here https://github.com/mozilla/firefox-ios/pull/1069
Not completely sure what the ask is here. Let's sync up tomorrow to hash this out.
Flags: needinfo?(alam) → needinfo?(dhenein)
^ Although I did just go through the commit log and update the copy in my design (posted in bug 1203563 before reading this bug).
(Reporter)

Comment 4

3 years ago
Anthony - can you add the full flow maybe to this bug so we can see it holistically, based on the three dependent bugs?

In the attachment in bug 1203563, it didn't include an update to the 'customize' and I want to ensure we get this included :). Maybe we can now use this bug for tweaking the final, end-to-end flow?

It's looking really good, in my opinion!

One tweak I would suggest (but not enforce) would be to also include the Firefox logo on all the screens on the 'sync' page. I'm just trying to make it super obvious what needs to be done here.
Flags: needinfo?(alam)
(Assignee)

Comment 5

3 years ago
I landed a new string for the customize page "Personalize things like your default search engine in Settings."... maybe thats all that we needed for this bug?
Flags: needinfo?(dhenein)
(Reporter)

Comment 6

3 years ago
Yep, I remembered you thinking along those lines but hadn't seen it show up yet in mocks. Yay!
Created attachment 8662462 [details]
Screen Shot 2015-09-17 at 9.23.02 AM.png

done!
Flags: needinfo?(alam)
Created attachment 8662491 [details]
prev_FR_V2.zip

Continuing the discussion from bug 1203563 here. I've attached all 5 screens in this package. It should contain all the changes from feedback :)

thoughts?
Attachment #8662462 - Attachment is obsolete: true
Flags: needinfo?(krudnitski)
Flags: needinfo?(dhenein)
(Assignee)

Comment 9

3 years ago
I like it. Ship it ;)
Flags: needinfo?(dhenein)
(Reporter)

Comment 10

3 years ago
I'm liking this as well!

My only 'nit' would be to say 'Personalize your experience like ...' instead of 'Personalize things like...' just to make it a bit more clear and less informal / colloquial.
Flags: needinfo?(krudnitski)
(In reply to Karen Rudnitski [:kar] from comment #10)
> I'm liking this as well!
> 
> My only 'nit' would be to say 'Personalize your experience like ...' instead
> of 'Personalize things like...' just to make it a bit more clear and less
> informal / colloquial.

I think if we want to add "experience" then we need to rework this a bit as "Personalize your experience like your default search engine in Settings" doesn't flow that well.

It could simply be "Personalize your browsing experience in Settings."

Or if we want to call out search, then I would suggest something like "Change your default search engine and other options in Settings."
(Reporter)

Comment 12

3 years ago
calling our search is deffo our intention based on feedback from our user research. I'm not married to 'experience' but it just felt that 'things' was very informal.

What about 'Make it yours like choosing your default search engine in Settings'? Or I stop wordsmithing and leave it up to your fine minds!
(In reply to Karen Rudnitski [:kar] from comment #12)
> calling our search is deffo our intention based on feedback from our user
> research. I'm not married to 'experience' but it just felt that 'things' was
> very informal.
> 
> What about 'Make it yours like choosing your default search engine in
> Settings'? Or I stop wordsmithing and leave it up to your fine minds!

How about:

Personalize your default search engine and more in Settings.
(Assignee)

Comment 14

3 years ago
Going to make an executive decision based on string freeze being today and all the fine feedback we've receieved, thanks all!

Going to ship 1.1 with "Personalize your default search engine and more in Settings."
(Reporter)

Comment 16

3 years ago
\o/
"Sync Your Devices." string has inaccurate localization comment.
Follow-up or new bug is required

Updated

3 years ago
Blocks: 1206901
String landed.
Whiteboard: [needs strings]
(Assignee)

Updated

3 years ago
Status: NEW → RESOLVED
Last Resolved: 3 years ago
Resolution: --- → FIXED
The following text is  displayed in the Customize panel "Personalize your default search engine and more in Settings."
Verifying as fixed on Beta 1111
Status: RESOLVED → VERIFIED

Updated

3 years ago
Depends on: 1238118
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