1209259 - Final Copy Strings: TP UI Tour in Fx42

Status: RESOLVED FIXED

(www.mozilla.org :: Pages & Content, defect)

Description

[Javaun Moradi [:javaun]]

GLOBAL FOOTER EDITS:

LEFT FOOTER TEXT SHOULD SAY: “Private Browsing with Tracking Protection” per Matej’s note.
 
RIGHT FOOTER: “Visit Privacy Preferences” LINK SHOULD HAVE SOME TREATMENT INDICATING IT’S CLICKABLE, SUCH AS AN UNDERLINE)


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STEP 1
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BODY TEXT: 
When you see the shield, Firefox is blocking some parts of the page that could track your browsing activity.


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STEP 2
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BODY TEXT: 

Some page areas may be missing, because they could allow third parties to track you across different websites.


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STEP 3
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BODY TEXT: 

It’s easy to turn off Tracking Protection for the website you’re on by clicking “Disable for this session.”

Not sure if you’re ready to try Tracking Protection?

LINK TEXT: Change Privacy Preferences

PRIMARY ACTION: Got it!

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STEP 4
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HEADING:

Thanks for learning about the new Private Browsing with Tracking Protection.

LINK TEXT:
Learn more about how it works by visiting the [FAQ page.] 

BUTTON:
Restart tour

Comment 1

[Javaun Moradi [:javaun]]

Clarifications:

In the Global Footer, instead of "Firefox Tracking Protection" it becomes: "Private Browsing with Tracking Protection".


For step 4, the brackets around [FAQ page] mean that text is clickable (hyperlinked)

Comment 2

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

Please note: on Step 3 we can't include a link within the panel text, and we can't split it into more than one paragraph (this was why the footer link was originally created).

Comment 3

[Javaun Moradi [:javaun]]

Sorry, looks like we had a version control issue w/ the copy doc and hadn't struck that "Not sure you're ready to try..." line in the Gdoc

So, the only change is that "It's easy to disable..." becomes "It's easy to turn off..."

(In reply to Alex Gibson [:agibson] from comment #2)
> Please note: on Step 3 we can't include a link within the panel text, and we
> can't split it into more than one paragraph (this was why the footer link
> was originally created).


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STEP 3
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BODY TEXT: 

It’s easy to turn off Tracking Protection for the website you’re on by clicking “Disable protection for this session.”


PRIMARY ACTION: Got it!

Comment 4

[Javaun Moradi [:javaun]]

Alex, please also ensure when you update step three that the body text mentions “Disable protection for this session.”  The word "protection" was missing from the step 3 at the top as well.

Thanks

Comment 5

[Alex Gibson [:agibson]]

There is also some alternate text for Step 3. I'm going to assume this is correct, but please let me know ASAP if not:

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STEP 3
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BODY TEXT: 

It’s easy to turn off Tracking Protection for the website you’re on by clicking “Disable protection for this session”.

ALT BODY TEXT:

It’s easy to turn on Tracking Protection for the website you’re on by clicking “Enable protection”.

Comment 6

[Javaun Moradi [:javaun]]

This is all correct. Signing off on UI Tour strings.